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Old 09-13-2007, 01:15 PM   #3 (permalink)
Pickled Pink
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I like the song and the guys voice and the lyrics. But honestly, it NEEDS A BRIDGE! Not meaning to be cranky, it just needs to have something to break up the slight sing-songy feeling of the verse which is so pretty at first but then starts to get very monotonous.

And an arrangement. Other than that, perfect for Kellie!
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